Chapter 1 (Introduction): NJW Chapter 2 (Data correction): CAO (SB to supply gain evolution plots) CAO, JC, SB Improve figures 2.10 & 2.11 by wider time bins CAO checks fig. 2.13 Chapter 3 (Background determination) : NL write a section on how background is handled in source extraction NJW reduces text for background modelling Chapter 4 (Non-imaging results): PK checks the text, JC checks fig. 4.1 & 4.2 Chapter 5 (Imaging) NL & NJW rewrites and focus on improvements Chapter 6 (Source detection): PK section 6.1 (source position) New figures NJW section 6.2 (source detection significance) NJW/NL section 6.3 (source fluxes) Chapter 7 (Source property extraction): SL New Crab spectral investigations and (perhaps) weak source example. New light curve example if required. Chapter between 7 and 8 (Image mosaicking): JC Text and new figure(s). Overall editorial work: SMN and NJW